10. Not Just a Little Girl Alone

by Thomas Davis

I

The morning light spilled on the floor and woke
Wei from a dreamless sleep. She yawned and stretched,
Got up into the cold of early morning.
She built a fire to take the chill away,
Then fried potatoes on the stove before
She shrugged into her heavy coat and stood
Before the door, her heart-beat loud, her hands
So still they felt as if they’d never move.
She felt her mother’s hands move through the air.
She let her hands move like her mother’s hands.
Light jumped into the early morning light.
Outside a hissing sound steamed through the air.
Wei stopped the motions, pushed against the door.

A wall of snow confronted her beyond
The space her light had made around the door.
She started weaving hands again, the light
Streamed from her fingers in the frigid cold.
Snow turned to steam, a whiteness hissing up
Into the morning’s crystal clear blue sky.
She walked toward the wood pile, open ground
Materializing as she slowly walked.
She felt triumphant, filled with victory.
The storm was gone, and she could make a path
Through seven feet of hard packed, drifted snow.
She’d make it through the winter storms and cold.
She was not just a little girl alone.

II

The Old One, tired from lack of sleep, went out
Onto the ledge outside her cave and launched,
her wings alive to currents in the air,
Her eyes so deep with seeing that the universe
Throbbed, blazing morning light, around her head.

She flew above the cabin where the girl
Was steaming snow into the morning skies.
The sight of magic shining in the sun
Unsettled her; the girl unsettled her.

A moment later, higher in the sky,
She saw two hunters, with their snowshoes sunk
Into the sweeping plains of drifted snow,
Strain up the mountainside, the snow too deep
To let them make the three day trek to where
The human girl was gathering her wood.
They’d be at least a week at struggling
Up slopes that steepened rising into mountains.

What should she do? She asked herself, disquiet
a power in the steady beat of wings.
What madness had the girl brought to the world?

She swooped toward the hunters, forcing them
To see her hurtling from the shining skies.
The hunters stopped and looked at her, dismay
And fright stunned through the way they stood and looked.
The one she’d singed raised up his arm and fist.
She tipped her wings and soared toward the mountains.

She flew above the cottage where the girl
Was loaded down with heavy chunks of wood.
She swooped so low she had to swerve to miss
The cottage roof, her whirling, golden eyes
Locked deep into the girl’s small human eyes.

Wei did not flinch or turn her head away,
But looked into the Old One’s eyes, a question
Unsaid inside her look. Ssruanne soared high
Toward the mountain peaks again, toward
The places where the wind blew unabating
In fierce intensity and moaning rage.

III

Wei felt the dragon’s wings before she saw
The eyes that coldly bored into her mind.
She felt intelligence inside the glare
And felt the dragon searching deep inside
Wei’s heart. She stood and watched the golden dragon
Fly up toward the mountains high above
The peaks that towered over where Wei lived.
She fought to memorize the dragon’s shape
And how it felt inside its golden eyes.

IV

Inside the moaning winds the Old One sent her thoughts
Toward the human girl. Run child, she thought.
The hunter has his cunning and his bow.
The dragons have no love for human kind.
Child, run and hide, she thought. From all of us.

Audio: Not Just a Little Girl Alone

Note: This is the tenth installment of a long poem. Inspired by John Keats’ long narrative poem, Lamia, it tells a story set in ancient times when dragons and humans were at peace. Click on the numbers to reach other sections, or go to the Categories box to the right under The Dragon Epic. Click on 1 to go to the beginning and read forward. Click on 9 to read the ninth section of the poem. Click on 11 to go forward one section.

10 Comments

Filed under Poetry, The Dragon Epic, Thomas Davis

10 responses to “10. Not Just a Little Girl Alone

  1. Your descriptions are so original and life-like! My favourite line is “Her eyes so deep with seeing that the universe throbbed”. Wow.

  2. Thomas as always \when you post these they are the highlight for my day. I’ve been following along and though I’ve not commented on all I must tell you I am so awestruck. You have woven yet another masterful piece of word -smithing . Bravo !

  3. Thomas, I was so glad to see this latest installment, today. Printed it out, to savor once again. I’m loving this story, and the growing magic and connection between Wei and the dragon – and wondering what will happen next. Will they become companions or will they compete for power? Or…? Looking forward to finding out!

    BTW, Thomas – I keep meaning to let you know how much I enjoyed “Salt Bear”. Have been intending to email you about it, and will soon. (I’d love to see a sequel – didn’t want it to end! 🙂 )

  4. Caddo Veil

    Hi Thomas–I listened to this between church services this morning, and not surprisingly, was equally blessed!! I’m glad that I can read the poem, before or after listening to it–because sometimes I get so enthralled by your voice, that I confess I lose track of the finely crafted story and elegant word images. Mostly, I’m glad these will be here forever (according to my tech-neighbor)–so I can listen to you whenever I need a fix. Love and prayers for you and Ethel. Hope the week goes well!

  5. Julie Catherine

    Thomas, I eagerly look forward to every installment of this epic poem, and you never disappoint. I freely admit I’m totally addicted to this! And so glad you’ve done another audio … wonderful! ~ Julie 🙂

  6. I must have a go at blank verse one day as it is so effective and particularly in a narrative like this. Well done as usual Thomas in this latest installment.

  7. Anna Mark

    “From all of us”…why must she run from all of them? I saw the cottage roof, the hunters coming, the Old One flying down, and the mountains all from above as though I was with the dragon looking down over the scene with my yellow eyes. And I was in the cabin moving my hands with the child. Will she hear the voice of the Old One? Will she run? What makes her so apart from them all? Why is she so different and to be feared? Wonderful.

  8. Thomas, I continue to be totally entranced by the growing relationship between Wei and Ssruanne, girl and old dragon. They are growing to need each other more and more against the ignorant hunters of the village, aren’t they? I think I am becoming Wei when I read these installments!

  9. Fascinating poetic narrative, lovingly detailed…

    ‘The morning light spilled on the floor and woke
    Wei from a dreamless sleep. She yawned and stretched,
    Got up into the cold of early morning.
    She built a fire to take the chill away,
    Then fried potatoes on the stove…’

    and magical

    ‘She swooped toward the hunters, forcing them
    To see her hurtling from the shining skies…’

    engrossing and meaningful!

    ‘Child, run and hide, she thought. From all of us.’

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